Thirteen

Many dreams are moving on my mind
One of them was that i was blind
Thirteen drops of rains
Falling in front on my eyes
and non of them was seen
Thirteen!!
it was a mystery for me
Thirteen years i fell in love with you
Thirteen days i was going with you
and in thirteen seconds you made me blind
You will come soon im sure
I will die soon and im O.K
but before i die
i was to tell you
thirteen butterflies i want you to put
beside my tomb
and take care of the rest
thirteen years that are left

Reviews

[Cherry Lai^_^♥~~]

Nice...

[Akshat♥]

very creative...i liked it a lot especially the butterfly part...
nice thought of taking thirteen..dreams come true when
you take it on:)

[Sweets]

This is so creativeeee :)

[Enigma]

Brilliant. And a very apt title too. Its a uniqe write, loved it. :)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Privilege to read this poem :) Emotional indeed!

[EMF]

This is beautiful.
Thank You

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13 butterflies like that part, very creative