say it now

Say it once
admit it now
you love me
you want me
you need me
im sure of that
but now im almost done
my soul is traveling
to the world of peace
to the world of honesty
to that nice place
you are the winner but admit is now
say it today
im almost done
im going on
im leaving today
just remember me
remember
that im the only one that loved you
im the only one that adored you
im the only one that will save you
im the one that will always be your back
the pillow that you will fall in
im the one that will be the tree
that you will sit under it in the hot days
it will save you from the sun
i will be the umbrella that you will protect you
from the rain
i will be the home
that you will be in it
to save from the war
i will be the sky
that will rain love on you
and will keep its eyes on you
to give you everything nice in this life
i love you forever
and GOOD BYE

Reviews

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

You write lovely...!!!!!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Another great poem:) Excellent use of metaphors

[E.V. Black]

Mhm, I found the "i will be" part going on a bit longer than I expected. Thus, I began to skim over the words just a little. Otherwise, pretty cool.

[Enigma]

Nice. Wonderful use of metaphors. Simple and straight to the point. But hey, even though we love someone with our whole heart, we cant really force them to "admit" that they love us. just a stray thought. :P
Great poem anyhow. :)