Days and life

Day by day
life moves away
sometimes it give us sparkles
others it give us rain
Darkness could be a day
but shiness would be everyday
starting with our lives
with the  first minuet
we are in today
and we should be ambitious
that tomorrow will come
and it might be better than today
it might bring us a treasure
and it might  be a triumph
it might send us a groom
and it might be as a broom
clear our history
from every mistake
and give us another chance
to be the glory
Queens and king
we might become
and we should always be ambitious
about tomorrow
trust it
as it could do
be ambitious
as you should be
the day will go on
and might leave a footprint in our heart
and might be cancelled from our memories
but it will always be
the best day ever
because it is in our hands
and tomorrow is a history
will be written in our dairy
and one day you will read it and laugh away
til you cry
and that day would be
THE DAY YOU WILL RECOGNIZE YOUR FACE IN AND KNOW YOURSELF
AND REMOVE ALL THE SHADOWS IN FRONT OF YOU
AND LIVE NORMALLY

Reviews

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Wonderful..!!!!

[lifesmith]

wow, this is such a wonderful and beautiful poem. (Is it weird that the voice in my head was reading it in a whisper?)
It is so simple yet so powerful.

ps: there's 1 or 2 grammatical errors here like minuet instead of minute...other than that, absolutely beautiful!!