this life

I woke up that morning

I saw the trees naked

The land was thirsty

The flowers were died

The clouds are shouting

The sun is turned off

The people were in asleep

The animals were crying

The sea was angry

The sky was sleepy

The streets were empty

The ice was melting

 

The moon is up

But the night didn’t come yet

Out of my window

The life was like a bad dream

It was the prison

Of my freedom

But in front of my window

There was that home

That light

That sun

Of my life

There were my parents

There was my family

That beautiful moon

With its silvery light

And that smooth words

 

My family is my blanket

In that cold rainy day

And the fire in my camp

I love you allJ

Reviews

[WriteWiz99]

was this like a bad dream?

[Linda]

Sooo nicey, xoxox

[Jeremy Baker]

Wonderful and sentimental, with great imagery! Well done!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A great build up, with wonderful sentimental heartwarming and touching words written here. Simply beautiful :)

[Enigma]

That was sweet. A family is a much needed supprt for everyone.

[stars are far]

thanks :)

[Sweets]

Nice one :)
I loved it