the beautiful one

She was walking beside the sea

With her beauty

And silence

Listening to the water sound

Trying to forget the world

Looking for the peace in this life

Dreaming about the life

And remembering

The past, the present

and expecting for her future

A nice and hopeful one

Her light was more recognized

Than the moon light

In that dark and black night

She was as an angle

She looked at the sea

And began wishing

To have a nice days

And be that person

That everyone like

And love

And hope for a successful future 

           

Reviews

[sweet candy]

luv the poem ,i just feel it
really nice work

[Sweets]

"She was an angle" angle is the maths thingy
It's angel* =)
Good poem :D