Randomly In Love

just lost

Countless tear drops and million pieces of the same heart,

Bloody tears and lots of drugs going down to the stomach

 

Nothing I can say, and no one I can talk to, about you

Everything seems to be so dim and so grey.

 

The sun rays are no more yellow and the moon is no more silver

Skies are no more, blue and clouds are no more white. They’re black!

 

Everyone around me is a part of you, they are all you

But none of them is the “the full you”, they are not you.

 

Those broken mirrors around me assure me that you are not the one

But my heart says you are. Kill that heart. Poison it. Slaughter it. Take it.

 

Everything around me calls your name and my heart screams

I chained that heart and every time it beats, it hurts more.

 

I miss you baby, more than everything and more than anyone.

I love you so much and I know you don’t.

Author's Note

I don't know what I feel, I just need to say anything.
The picture, is sent from a friend to me,when i was telling her about him. (the picture is from instagram I dunno what page). and i dont know if its true, the way i talk about him.

enjoy it

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

"I love you so much and I know you don't."

These lines have to be some of the strongest lines I've read in the recent weeks, and I have to say that these lines are what makes your piece hit home. Trying desperately to distract yourself despite feeling like the lines you illustrate is the most difficult thing any human being can be asked to do, and you've exemplified this concept in such a lovely way. Well done.

[ANTO]

Just as everyone has said Suhad - the emotion here is powerful - it is raw and visceral
Theres a whole batch of mixed emotions which really communicates the feeling of being 'caught' in love - like a bear in a trap and just as angry with the trap as Im sure the bears are with their foot for keeping it where it doesnt wish to be.
Animals chew their limbs off in an effort to escape and the subject of this performs a similar a literal gesture in this part - "But my heart says you are. Kill that heart. Poison it. Slaughter it. " Shockingly similar.
Great write Suhad.

[~]

It did remind me of the "accidentally in love" idea. As reading it I can feel the loss and pain. I can't tell you whether poets feel more, or they are willing to cut themselves open and let everyone poke the soul with their pointing fingers .. I wish you a strong mind and sun rays of happiness :)

[Saddam]

You has just bring out heart into paper,
I feel for it is like I'm a dumber.

Amazing write dear.

[wordman]

you can bring out those emotions,like no other,great write

[Leslie Philibert]

A fine poem, your work impresses with the force of emotional validity, well done.

[hardeep sabharwal]

An emotional piece to read, I like its essence, a nice read

[Jamestown]

Powerful longing piece of work, I can appreciate this write, I too went
through a miserable longing period in my life, this is beautiful and
heart wrenching, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!