Randomly In Love

just lost

Countless tear drops and million pieces of the same heart,

Bloody tears and lots of drugs going down to the stomach

 

Nothing I can say, and no one I can talk to, about you

Everything seems to be so dim and so grey.

 

The sun rays are no more yellow and the moon is no more silver

Skies are no more, blue and clouds are no more white. They’re black!

 

Everyone around me is a part of you, they are all you

But none of them is the “the full you”, they are not you.

 

Those broken mirrors around me assure me that you are not the one

But my heart says you are. Kill that heart. Poison it. Slaughter it. Take it.

 

Everything around me calls your name and my heart screams

I chained that heart and every time it beats, it hurts more.

 

I miss you baby, more than everything and more than anyone.

I love you so much and I know you don’t.

Author's Note

I don't know what I feel, I just need to say anything.
The picture, is sent from a friend to me,when i was telling her about him. (the picture is from instagram I dunno what page). and i dont know if its true, the way i talk about him.

enjoy it

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

"I love you so much and I know you don't."

These lines have to be some of the strongest lines I've read in the recent weeks, and I have to say that these lines are what makes your piece hit home. Trying desperately to distract yourself despite feeling like the lines you illustrate is the most difficult thing any human being can be asked to do, and you've exemplified this concept in such a lovely way. Well done.

[Kathleen Montgomery]

So great. I love that it describes the emotions it does. Very re-readable. A classic.

[FateDictates]

this was so open honest and raw as well beautiful and I want to readmoreof your work, so off I go...

[Einstein Noodle]

can not see the pic :}
such an honest outpouring .. one of our worst human experiences is to love and not be loved in return .. to be seemingly helpless to break the spell and hopeless to find respite .. well said .. i can feel it! i can relate for sure! :)
E.

[Cerise]

Amazing write ....speechless...loved it

[Ricky Campbell]

I love this! Great work, really captures the heartbreak. I feel bad for you! Very good write.

[stars are far]

hehe thank you so much and you really dont have to because evrything is getting better :)

[R Smith]

highly charged emotions Suhad, this is not so much a review as a wish that you find again your love or recover from this and move on as i think you will find that is what happens eventually :)

[cycy]

the title really intrigued me well written hunny

[Mila]

Very real and heart wrenching poem. I am certain many can relate to these words!

Well done!

-Mila

[MsJewel]

The darkness, the desperation in your words is so powerful. I'm certain this came from a very real place. I hope you will find peace my friend.

:) Julie