Within You

Within the happy moment we imprison or tears

And with each day we try to create something new,

Our love stays there in my heart with no intuition

But I know that you need no credit card to pass the gate.

 

I love the way you smile and the way you laugh

That might sound like a cliché but that's on my behalf

I love you with every single soul that drifts in this world

Even love was shocked when he saw my love towards you.

 

Within the sheets of glances we hid on day 

I love you forever and that is what i want to say

I know everything might not become true

But all I want for the rest of my life is YOU.

 

Those poetic forms are broken when I got your name

No rules can bind me and there will be no shame.

That power of love we hold inside and the positive aura I have

All of them fell down; collapse, when you completed my half.

 

It was never that way and I was never this way

But we all have that one person whom we break the rules for

Whom we give up everything to have, and love

And to me that person is you

Author's Note

I wrote this I guess a week ago. I hope you like it :)
I suggest you watch this video on youtube:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4F5oD7G40ng#t=346

It is accurate and very sensitive.
have a nice day pals<3

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

will check the video .. and i can so relate to your poem .. we do break the rules for that one we want too much .. its not falling in love its strapping on rockets and launching over the cliff .. only we don't rocket to the moon .. we rocket to the rocks below .. and it ain't pretty .. can take forever to put the pieces back ... and if our love can endure in a more friendship way .. it is a good thing ;)
E.

[stars are far]

Actually the video shows my state now, and the poem is more what I want to say. And I do believe that what you say is so true, because sometimes we just choose the wrong way to deal with things. Thank you so much y dear friend

[hardeep sabharwal]

I enjoyed this piece much, a fine work from you