Within You

Within the happy moment we imprison or tears

And with each day we try to create something new,

Our love stays there in my heart with no intuition

But I know that you need no credit card to pass the gate.

 

I love the way you smile and the way you laugh

That might sound like a cliché but that's on my behalf

I love you with every single soul that drifts in this world

Even love was shocked when he saw my love towards you.

 

Within the sheets of glances we hid on day 

I love you forever and that is what i want to say

I know everything might not become true

But all I want for the rest of my life is YOU.

 

Those poetic forms are broken when I got your name

No rules can bind me and there will be no shame.

That power of love we hold inside and the positive aura I have

All of them fell down; collapse, when you completed my half.

 

It was never that way and I was never this way

But we all have that one person whom we break the rules for

Whom we give up everything to have, and love

And to me that person is you

Author's Note

I wrote this I guess a week ago. I hope you like it :)
I suggest you watch this video on youtube:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4F5oD7G40ng#t=346

It is accurate and very sensitive.
have a nice day pals<3

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sometimes clichés may actually be quite romantic...and there is power in what we are familiar with.

nicely done...in first line I read "imprison our tears"----

and yes, there is that person for whom we break the rules...no doubt about it. that is love.

[Saddam]

I like most the image. Yes friend, there is none other choice without him/her. Very deeply writing dear. I love it all.

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thank you so much for adding this to your favorites :) "him :D

[Saddam]

Its like dear.......... I love it. You're most welcome.

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

A deep and heart-touching write! Loved it! Excellent job! ☺

[R Smith]

an excellent tribute to your love Suhad, you express affection so very well :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A most telling piece that is sweet in it's delivery, well done, good read.

[Valentine]

A very sweet and tender write. I like your boldness wit the pen. Valentine

[~]

A heartfelt poem that with a bit of revision could be just great. thank you for the read request :)

[wordman]

a beautiful poem of love and longing

[Chris]

THAT was a very - real and understood - work of thought and caring.

[ANTO]

this is so beautiful - I really wish you well in your quest - God I really do. This plea should resonate around the world and amplify and smack him upside the head lol - thats just the old romantic in me getting carried away Suhad - your quest has me hooked - God Lov You
Great honest exposure of the heart here - stunning !!

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hehe, thats so nice of you. I really liked what you said, it actually made me laugh so hard. And I wish the same too.. May you stay blessed and loved Anto :) Thank you for your time

[ANTO]

And you Suhad - you sound wonderful - he's a lucky guy if he does get you :))
God Bless

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thank you so much ,thats the sweetest thing i heard this week :) . And he will always have me .