All I Want For Christmas

All I want for Christmas.

 

I’ve always heard that song and understood it

“All I want for Christmas is you”...

But who are you? And what are you? …

 

Gone with all what have passed in my life

Led me to hell, my everything was hitting me like a spell,

And I wanted to ask my dear Santa for a small thing…

 

Dear Santa, listen to me carefully…

This Christmas I want my country to be free

I don’t want to be here anymore, as an outcast, as a wrong one

Oh my country ….

I’ve worn your flag as my identity card

And I saw it all around, in people’s eyes, in friend’s eyes

That hatred that fell like poison into my heart

I have always admired you olive trees,

And your green meadows,

You’re wooden houses and those beautiful lands,

My dear Palestine, I never saw you neither my parents

My ancestors said they will leave you for a day or a week

They died waiting to open their house doors,

They died waiting for that “week” to end,

They just died,

And here we are, holding that dream

But can do nothing to make you free,

It’s been 48 years and they are getting more and more,

I want to smell my land and to kiss its ground,

I want to hug its trees and cry under its wooden houses

I want to go there and be safe forever

I want to be able to speak my tongue without being make fun of

I want to be there, live there… I want peace in my land

All I want is to have you one time Our Palestine…

Don’t want to spend more years as a refugee here

I want to be a person with a land and with a right...

All I want for Christmas is your freedom my love... 

Author's Note

if you are going to say bad things or that you don't like my country then please don't comment, we are free to write anything we want and express everything, and we must respect each other..

thank you all

Reviews

[R Smith]

massive emotion and feelings in this Suhad, I share your wish that your country could live in peace and freedom, if we could just spread that to the whole world it would be a dream come true for us all, oppression must become a thing of the past live and let live regardless of race or religion, let's all be one :)

[Alex Boyd]

Mind provoking, outside the box thinking, heart felt, and so many more things. Continue to cause awareness because a lot of people don't know. This is a very nice piece and like always I love reading your writings!!!!!!

[cycy]

this is such a differnt twist on christmas wishes well written love i am so proud of you xxxooo

[The Black Warrior]

This is beautiful Star! :D strong with a lot of emotions...very lovely :))

[Skai Rain]

I would never make fun of any Country. This is an honest and wonderful work. Great job!

[Einstein Noodle]

heartfelt plaintive cry .. honest and emotive ..
E.

[haffiz sm]

✌👍👌✌👏👏👏 no words to utter..... Speechless 😶..... ✌

[stars are far]

thank you so much haffiz, i appreciate you reading my work and commenting on it :)

[haffiz sm]

:) :* welxxxx.

[Khyati]

Your( not You’re) wooden houses and those beautiful lands
being made ( not make) fun of
I don't want to correct it though..
Doesn't matter if the words are not correct, your feelings still remain Righteous forever.
I will pray for Palestine. Bless Palestine..
It is very difficult to ask for someone else on Christmas and you did. You asked for your country..
Bless you, love and your country.

[M.A.Rathore]

This is the real outbust of the feelings of nationalism and peace in the country like Philestine which is struggling for its freedom from the oppressors. I think no one likes to live in the dire circumstances thar provide none except the humiliation. At the time while the rest world enjoys freedom one should be liberated from age-long traditions and haterd.
This piece pleas the libration of the country and live freely in this wide world.
Thanks for expressing so beautiful wishes to be fulfilled by Santa's arrivial.

[stars are far]

its far beyond what the "third person" caan see it, i have the nationality of the country i live in, but still treated like a "second option" in everything you try to take in life, job... and so on... and thank you for your words

[M.A.Rathore]

Welcome here . I hope for the betterment...

[wordman]

i can feel your pain ,i can see your want .i wish there could be a resolution but i`m afraid that only god
can resolve that problem

[stars are far]

I agree with you. thank you :)