For God's Sake

For what have passed in my life

I promise that for you, i will strive.

 

Every vow that my lips uttered for you

Will be kept and always be true.

 

With the rising of the sun and the shine of the moon

I will always pray to give you as my groom.

 

For God's sake, believe that what I say is true

All what I really want is to have you.

 

Believe that all my dreams involve your name

And every prayer starts with a lover blame.

 

Never blaming destiny or my fate

But blaming my heart for not taking a break.

 

For God's sake, read my poetry that is dedicated for you

And I’m sure you will know that I honestly adore you.

 

No matter where life takes us, and how we are apart

You will always be the one who broke my heart.

Author's Note

Hope you like

Reviews

[Khyati]

:'( Broke your heart! Bad! :'( But the poem was still exceptional, believe me (for God's sake.)

[The Black Warrior]

This is beautifully written, sad that he is the one the one who broke your heart, but the love and tenderness of the heart still remains.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Very beautifully written, its a good read, I like kita tone and essence
nice job mate, keep it up

[hardeep sabharwal]

Very beautifully written, its a good read, I like kita tone and essence
nice job mate, keep it up

[Mila]

Not a poetry expert, but I really liked this! Lovely writing here and the feelings were real, as were the conveying of them. Sorry I'm useless with poetry critique, but this was great!
Well done!

-Mila

[R Smith]

lovely writing Suhad, a sad and melancholy story of lost love, great flow and nice rhyme's just a sad but lovely poem bravo :)

[Leslie Philibert]

Like this too, I would use strife( noun) rather than the verb, strive, in L2 maybe...

For all that passed now in my life
That formed my love bound deep in strife..

[wordman]

all you have to do is beleive

[Alex Boyd]

I like the ending especially "No matter where life takes us, and how we are apart You will always be the one who broke my heart" Profound tragedy but still you hold on which is beautiful like Romeo and Juliet till death did them part a Greek tragedy and what's tragedy without love? What's love with failure and what's failure with attempt??? I could go on and on but two things are certain in this poem. Your love for him and how loving him religiously despite the heartache still you love him... Wow the true meaning agape love that God shows on us despite all down fall still God loves us. Thanks for sharing....

[Luximir]

Liked the obsession vibe from the poem. Very nice flow and the structure was well planned out. Thank you for sharing! Hope to see more writings soon :)