Amnesia 1

I want to hug you and kiss you so hard

To hold your hand and tell you how much I love you

I want to escape with you to every place, and any place

I want us to be alone, with no cameras, no phones, nothing…

I want to you to belong to me for one day,

To drive the car in the highways, with loud music

I want us to go under the trees play hide and seek

And when I find you, you kiss me, and when I find you

I bite you… like never … but you laugh…

I tell you that you mean the world to me and you say the same

We run across the meadows and laugh so loud…

Us, together… in love, insane…

And, at the end of that day… You ask me gently to stand there

In the middle of the street, telling me that there is a surprise,

You go to your car, drive with the highest speed,

And while I’m seeing you killing me, I smile and tell you I love you

I don’t move, I don’t complain, I just say that I love you..

Then you hit me so hard and my blood colors the dark night

You escape, and I don’t die…

I just wake up with amnesia ….

Author's Note

It's a free writing ...
hope you like

Reviews

[cycy]

wow this is a very intense poem Sue definitely not the ending i expected but altogether very intriguing and superbly written,,well done hunny

[Khyati]

I want to (eliminate the 'to') you to belong to me for one day,

It is sorrowful :( I HATE THAT GUY!
;) But I love your writing .. my fav. line is...
Then you hit me so hard and my blood colors the dark night
:) Keep writing :)

[hardeep sabharwal]

Very nicely penned, well written, I like ending most

[kate]

nice twist at the end! great job!

[Alex Boyd]

Lovely, twisted ending but I understand though. Everything must comes to an end and it's better to forget then to remember all of the pleasure and pain.

[R Smith]

its a fantastic story, a most unexpected outcome, i love it Suhad, great work :)

[wordman]

it sounds like a great place to be

[kayleigh]

it is really good and how you do it so well. it moves in sync with each line love it