It's Killing

   

When those velvet strings of memories hit my mind

I fall down, crying, sobbing for one more glance,

I frown with my broken pieces and what’s left of my pride

My mind think, but my heart is asking for last chance.

 

Just like the broken threads of light through tree leaves

My soul trembles and my eyes rain each night.

I keep listening to those love songs that assure my love believes

I cry, I break, but I still think that I have to fight.

 

No reason ever held me from loving you, just everything

I’ve been told that you are unhealthy and you are a mess

But I still fought, and always wanted to be your only thing

I always wanted you no matter what I have felt…

 

And for now, forever and always, for tomorrow

Moe, I will always love you, and your everything

No matter what, I pray for you, heaven in the after life

And happiness in this life… I love you…

However everything hurt to the extant of thinking about suicide 

But as long as I remember the song "Keep Breathing"..

Yeah...I'm still loving you ...

 

Ps: I’m always here for you my beautiful man .

Author's Note

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Reviews

[cycy]

ohhh suh the poem is lovely yet so so sad

[debraj]

just heart touching..... & so true like clean water great job...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

turn that anger into compassion...this poem does that...turning the other cheek, turning the heart to the light.

nicely done.

[Pryde Foltz]

And for now, forever and always, for tomorrow
Moe, I will always love you, and your everything
No matter what, I pray for you, heaven in the after life
And happiness in this life… I love you…

I have been here and you are a wise girl. Love is better than bitterness for sure. There may be a bit of an autocorrect issue in the last stanza. Might you mean 'extent' but otherwise a very meaningful write.

[Avinash]

What a beautiful piece of writing. From your every word it is apparent that you are deadly hit by love. However you can not do much in case the person who you love does not love himself and consequently does not like to be loved. However we pray for you and your love.

[R Smith]

Suhad this sounds like you really talking to a lover, so i wonder is it real or from your imagination, its a great poem and love song too, well written :)

[stars are far]

well im very sorry to tell that its all real ,..and yeah ,thank you so much Richard :)

[R Smith]

i'm so sorry that happened to you, hope for better times ahead :)

[hardeep sabharwal]

A sad love tale,
nice to read
thanks

[wordman]

a beautiful write love and pain intermingled

[Lyn Anderson]

A sad and longing piece for certain. Tones of desperation and an abusive relationship in parts. Minor grammatical errors, my mind thinks, one last chance, extent.