You Are The Reason

you told me you loved me then why did you go ?

For all the tears I shed last night, your name was there

For all the frowns I gave to the world, you were to declare

With all the smiles that were gone, you were talking them in the air

And still all what you say is that you don't care !

 

Through the long drive way, and all the hard times

You were the one whom I should blame, even when you come with smiles,

And those stormy nights that I looked at every time

You were the reason for each thunder that is never calm .

 

For all the sadness,, you are the reason

And to everything I'm passing through...

You are my constant season ...... 

 

You are the biggest reason..

 

for the sadness and the tears

for the mistrust and the fears

for everything and my grieves

Author's Note

I hope you like :)

Reviews

[Saumya]

Pain, love, care, and hatred can be so beautifully portrayed! your piece clearly proved it:)
one thing that i can clearly conclude from here is, that you still love the guy you are talking about:) n this is how beautiful n pure love is!:)

i can't promise this in your case( as i don't know much about this guy) but it is a matter of fact, that when you love someone truly, your love is rewarded:)
have faith in your love, may b the person loves you more and comes back in a form you never imagined of himself n surprise u:)

btw the quote was equally good as you poem:)

good luck

[Rana]

The sorrow and pain that comes out of passion and love is so beautifully spoken of in here.. Great poem, plus the quote used too..

[Shiveon]

you r the biggest reason for my smile :) nice work , Stars are no longer Far

[R Smith]

I think your writing improves with every word Suhad, this is a wonderful although sad poem, i really like the construction of your lines, your flow is great and this is one of your very best bravo :)

[cycy]

this is so sad sue but well written dear lovely poem reminds me of song by taylor swift "he is the reason for the teardrops on my guitar, the only one that keeps me wishing on a shooting star" i feel ur emotions hun

[Jristine Bello]

It shows the intensity of the pain which truly exists and you truly have orchestrate it. Very powerful..

[wordman]

lots of pain in this write great write

[Colton Warr]

This is powerful, truly powerful. I feel your pain through these words. A beautiful piece. Thank you for writing!

[Briana O'Connor]

Great sense of powerful emotion behind your words. The meter is a bit rocky, but other than than well penned.