Just A Hope

Hope its nice where you are..

...And now you gone far away 

After the 40 kms that used to separate us 

Now they are more than 100 and 1000..

 

You went with out saying a goodbye 

Without kissing me and saying you will be back, 

You were just gone in a night that was moonless. 

 

oh yes, who am I ? You dont know me anymore

After we were each others lives,

now we are worse than strangers...

 

But I'm still here praying for you

Asking the angels to always be around you

To protect you from any fall honey..

 

All I can say now, I hope its nice wherever you are

I hope you are sleeping in a warm place

I hope you are eating just like always ..

I hope you are safe, and I hope that you are Happy...

Author's Note

I hope you like,.. still trying to break this writers block:) .
than you

Reviews

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Missing someone who was close to you can eat away at your soul. It can be consuming to get too concerned about them when they are no longer close by. A lovely poem.

[lovelife]

well done, a peice from the heart usaly the best

[Tai Ryens]

These are truly heavy words of parting you have penned here, stars; well done.

[don't know]

As always a good read written from the heart.

[Carly_Ruth]

Very nice. A good read. Captured a lot of different emotions surrounding such an emotional goodbye or lack there of.

[Colton Warr]

I really like this piece. You touch on quite the emotional subject, saying goodbye, and you are able to capture all of the different emotions that are associated with it. Well written, thanks for writing!

[Colton Warr]

Also, keep writing through that writers block! In my humble opinion, that is the best way to break through!

[R Smith]

its a truth in this writing that one can leave the other with barely a glance back yet the one left behind feels the loss and longing so deep that they carry it with them like a burden for many years, i know that feeling and i recognize the beauty contained here in this excellent poem, much praise to you Suhad for another piece of great poetry :)

[Pryde Foltz]

A wise woman lets go of that which would be free. A very wise and beautiful poem, Stars, and one I can easily relate with. I would be pleased if you took a look at similar write of mine … a poem of letting go:)


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=10cWeLo5AJg

[Rana]

This is touching.. When things change between people, its rarely this way.. Theres great beauty in the narrator's view of things here..

[hardeep sabharwal]

a nice poem of separation, and the feeling here is intense, nice read