Never Again

you told me you loved me then why did you go ?

Fresh as your love, wild as your heart

I want to bleed in your soul with one start

A kiss can be an option or any other part

All what I want is to be one time in your heart.

 

As I see you in the corner, I run to you

I jump and you hold me just like we used to do

I kiss your neck then some lips meet

When people look around, just like we are odd.

 

I hold your face like its the first time I see your eyes

Your perfume is all over my body and your parts too.

As the sky cry when you push me off yourself

When I wake up from my day dream..

 

And I realize ....

 

You werent holding me or kissing me back

You were trying to make me away and off your jack,

I cried like hell when the sky tears fell over my cheek

people were waking me up from my panic attack..

 

I just though one time we can be back

As I swore from the billion time in my life

That this love will never ever start again,

I pick up whats left of my pride and walk away...

Author's Note

I feel like I'm facing writers block , this poem took me time more than any poem, though its not good, but I just dont want to feel like I cant write.. thats why I wrote it.l
thanks for your time.. 7:17 pm

Reviews

[John Byrd]

This is really powerful and I can feel the emotion as if i'm the character. Beautifully written. I think it's really good!

[wordman]

you write beautiful poetry we all get writers block it comes with the territory

[R Smith]

don't let the block win, this is a good poem and sometimes it takes longer than usual to write poems, if i had a problem with the block i would pick say 10 words just any words and write something using each word as its beginning, its like a springboard and sometimes you may not see where its going but as i have found here, a review can reveal things you never saw before that's the beauty of writing we don't always know what we do but we do it just the same, Suhad you are a great writer, don't even dwell on such a thing as a block, inspiration is in every word, go get them!!

[Christopher Robin]

This has a few grammar and spelling issues but nothing that could not be tightened with a revision. Overall the flow is fairly decent, yet the subject matter lets it down. 'Girl gets let down by boy' should be the tagline for writerscafe.org

You have the talent, toss the 'woe is me' card out the window and start playing with a new hand.
Best way to beat writer's block? Write about it, even if it makes no sense it will get the gears turning and before you know it an idea will come along.

-Robin

[stars are far]

oh.. i do believe tha t "girl gets down by boy", should be a tag line here, since its what we write because of, I mean the best way to get over something is to get it out , like a fish, take it out of water and it will die.. so yeah , and thank you.. i will try to write about it... try if its the best way.l. thank you so much for passing by :)