I Love All Your Deatils

you told me you love me then why did you go ?

The way your hair flows with the breeze

And my heart smile and then freeze.

 

That gap between your teeth which I love

It makes my soul for a hug live and strive.

 

The way your lips move when you smile

It makes want to have you forever between my parts.

 

You are the human that summarizes love

And your details are love's sweet parts.

 

Oh my baby... I will forever love your details....

 

I love how your figures move over mine

And how you dance under the moon light.

 

I love how you hug my waist and make me drawn

With your perfume and your whims my love..

 

I love the way you interrupt my words with a kiss

And how my soul soar to the seventh sky..

 

And when my father complain about your loud voice 

I will hug you and tell him, he is the one i want to 

Author's Note

I hope you like..

Reviews

[ayesha gupta]

a lovely poem. words are used beautifully.

[ASHIDASH]

So glad I read this. Nice poem

[wordman]

a sweet tribute I liked it

[Tai Ryens]

Such vivid detail in describing the feeling of missing somebody and how the thought of them consumes us with its marvelous splendor. Well done, you certainly do adore the person who serves as the subject of this poem.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

This is so sweet! Yes, only the little things are paid attention to whenever we truly adore something or someone.

[Briana O'Connor]

Great expression of love. Some of the tenses were off, but other than that well done. Thank you for sharing.

[R Smith]

Well done Suhad a remarkable love song here, yes it could use some edits but I'm no saint at that so ignore me just believe me when I say its very, very good , you are a great poet :)

[Frieda P]

Very sweet stars, love the seventh sky soar, fly. :)

[Lyn Anderson]

This is very heartfelt and sweet. Check your verbs, some need s's, and some don't. A good grammar program would help with these minor things. Good job, and the form is lovely.

[stars are far]

Thank you for your time, and well yes i know about those grammar stuff, im just too lazy to edit.. but one time i will, thank you