Soullessness breaks

You Told me you loved me, then why did you leave ?

As I hold my wine and like tear drops I make them fall

Between my lips, I call for joy and my heart breaks

Wine cries with my sadness and with my hearts foul

Being sued for love and being loved once.

 

My heart yearns as it hears the sound of Richard Marx song

“Waiting for you”, my wine started to scream his name

As each drop was meant to make me forget him but BANG!

I felt like it was revenge or a series of a life’s game.

 

I was still waiting for you when my heart’s crack screamed

Asking for a medicine to be healed, but the only cure was you

And you, you were so far away, dreaming of another and happy

But leaving my heart here, broken, breaking, and will always be.

I drop my glass and leave my heart in his sorrow stuck

i raise my voice while my body is numb

I call your name and laughed so hard ,harder like never

Then fall on my ground, with tears around, heartless, speechless.

Staring at the sign that says :

YOU ARE NOT ALLOWED TO FALL IN LOVE.

Author's Note

well, a problem that hit me today brought all of that, and when they decided that im not allowed to fall in love so yeah.. well. it hurts to feel that you MUST be heartless and you are not allowed to cry.. but yeah ..
thank you for your review (9;30pm)

Reviews

[Ankit Kumar]

ahem ahem...just mesmerizing ;)

[Tai Ryens]

Steeling your heart because the pain of a heartbreak is still fresh in your mind, teasing with a pain that still hurts so much because you are spending your evenings alone with a glass of wine drinking your sorrows away. Well done.

[Einstein Noodle]

i love the glass of wine as tears ... falling .. and the subject drinking them .. its one of those i wish i had thought of that things .. its perfect .. being told to swallow ones own tears .. to swallow being in love .. to hide feelings .. we do it all the time but unsuccessfully ... powerful feelings never stay hidden ..
i can't help but wonder who would tell you not to fall in love ... nor allowed to cry??? i hope you are strong and scratch them off your list of confidantes .. find another to hear your story .. and if they get tired of it ..find another ..until your story is finally told to your own satisfaction .. that's what i say .. :)
E.

[stars are far]

Thank you so much for the advice and yes sir i will do :)

[Leslie Philibert]

Suhad writes very well, what I like is the veracity and honesty of her writing, a clear voice..

[R Smith]

such a sad tale, you are allowed to fall in love as long and as hard as you wish, although this particular love has produced a remarkable poem, as I always say turn a negative into a positive, use it and produce such art.

[wordman]

sometimes life is not fairand some people think there doing the right thing