Thank You For The Dance

My poem :

 

Like that night when the moon took the hand of a star.

 Making it move from its place to another sky.

Where he held it so gently and with a shinning smile

He pulled her closely, sweetly and smoothly to his side

 

The music played and she started to smile

Her black dress was engaging the darkness of the night.
 And his beautiful smile was giving her a slight light ,

They danced until it was so dark and its midnight.

 

He made her happy when he is a cousin and a close friend to her

But someone that really wants her to be happy in life.

 He is a very beautiful part of her life, and made her last days

 He is a family that everyone wants to have.

 

Let me tell you how you make me smile like i never did

. And make me thrilled and dance like a little kid

. Let the memory of the dance remian forever

, In the hearts and in the beautiful life cover.

 

His poem :

 

come to you and saw your face,

I think i must go with her to a special place,

The day’s night coming every time near,

I hope that the night will be a night clear...

 

Im dancing with you in the moonshine,

I write it only for you: line for line...

Its midnight and the stars are shining

And i will write your name with a silver lining

 

We are dancing and we are happy

You look is so pretty

I will feel in my knees

And in this moment i will freeze.

 

Thats my poem for you

 

Author's Note

That poem is written for me cousin who gave me the best dance 3 days ago, on Tuesday 12-8-2014.. I say thank you so much for the dance , and for the beautiful poem that i truley loved .
And for the reviewrs please note that English is his 3rd language, and he is self learning it, thats the reason for his mistakes, but i thank him truely for the sweetness he put and the rhyme he tried to put together just for me .

And thanks for your reviews

Reviews

[ANM]

Very well written some beautiful lines!

[Eve Ola]

awww this is so lovely I really enjoyed its sweetttt
"Im dancing with you in the moonshine,
I write it only for you: line for line...
Its midnight and the stars are shining
And i will write your name with a silver lining... I am loving it Thanks for inviting

[wordman]

a beautiful tribute great write on both

[R Smith]

love the dance and the two poem idea is great, very inventive writing.

[MsJewel]

A beautiful dance of love, so sweet and romantic!

:) Julie