I Don't Feel Anymore

you told me you loved me then why did you go ?

I don’t feel like reading neither writing

I don’t feel like sleeping neither staying I wake.

 

I don’t feel like I can take this anymore

The sun and moon seems alike just like a moor .

 

I don’t feel my heart beating like before

And I don’t know if I’m breathing and what for.

 

I don’t feel like climbing to the sky like a child

But I’m climbing my days to reach the darkness .

 

I don’t know what the word “feel “mean anymore

I think its executed from the dictionary once more.

Is it because of you or because of anyone or just me

I don't feel like or anything that is related to thee

 

Like love and like so many heartfelt things that used to be

I think that “feel” is nothing but more that a virtual sea.

And all what I wanted to do now, is take a deep breath

Smile, and just keep my dreams going on.

Author's Note

Just some thought.. true maybe
15-8-2014 . 2:35 pm

Reviews

[MsJewel]

Dreams can bring us peace and comfort, but they are only dreams. In reality to not feel anything is so very sad, heartbreaking to think that one can be so numb they cannot feel. At least to feel pain lets one know they are alive. This is one of the saddest poems I've read in a long time.

:) Julie

[Baby Ricochet]

I've felt that way before.

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Some deeper truths in this wonderful poetry.

[Bhumika Devkota]

Nice, sad poem. I can some what relate to that.

[Aehr]

I've been through various phases of emotionlessness and feeling just nothing at all, and its worse than feeling too deeply, to be honest. You just feel this void in your chest and nothing else. I understand this poem, and I can connect well with it. Good write. The last two lines are my favourite. Well done. Xx.

[Einstein Noodle]

i think this is the best line for me:
"But I’m climbing my days to reach the darkness ." powerful description all by itself! and how deep the darkness must be .. nice one stars!
E.

[Andy Ruffett]

I feel like some of the poem loses it's flow. Especially some of the long lines. Also, the sun and moon "seem" alike and the word feel "means".

With writes,

-Andy Ruffett

[stars are far]

feels like it seems, they are alike in my eyes...

[Tai Ryens]

This is a very skillfully engaging piece where your discontent is expressed poignantly along with your willingness to keep on following your dreams despite the disconcerting emptiness that seems to follow. Well done.

[R Smith]

a lovely poem but somewhat sad from the writers point of view, keep those dreams going on your writing is great.