Pink

You told me you love me why did you leave ?

Pink

 

You called me late at night as the moon beams hit my window

You said slowly and with no fear of losing your own little ego :

"I want to see you tomorrow so don't cry on your pillow"

I laughed and smiled but I said "OK" and that went by as an eco.

 

I woke up at six, had my cup of coffee and some music

Took at deep breath, then went to my tub..

Thinking, dreaming, and making a plan in my head it was a bit confusing

A kiss maybe, or just a hug ? Or a “call out” as they said in the club.

 

I stood there in front of my mirror and shook my head

Took a pink dress with a pink lipstick and nail polish,

I knew you loved pink, but I don’t want to regret what I once did,

I dressed up my self, put my headphones and drove to you.

 

As I stood there beside you, I smelled the "one million" scent

I thought I'd drown or just fall into you, but I was so strong .

You turned your face after you smelled my own scent in the air

And I saw your eyes opened wide and your mouth is falling down.

 

I smiled and said :" Here I am, so how are you? " then smiled again

You said with trembling voice " All dressed in pink, do you think I can bear it ?"

I laughed when the answer came from my eyes.. 

" I know you love Pink, but you don't love me ".... 

Author's Note

Just something ,, 4-8-2014
2:37 pm

Reviews

[Kathleen Montgomery]

Interesting - not just typical - taking the time for someone in appearance who feels romantic for silly reasons like pink

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Letting him know what he's missing is a great way to get a little pay back.

[Lyn Anderson]

It is true that something can be funny, and truthful, and sad all at the same time. That is true of this . One thing, eco should be echo.

[R Smith]

this is just a fire smouldering that's waiting to burst into flame....."pink flame", everything in it sounds of desire and is written perfectly, lovely poem.

[Tai Ryens]

Ah, the things we do in the name of adoration, and the ways we can mistake it for love at times. Well done.

[Einstein Noodle]

did not expect her to say that at the end .. i was intrigued and surprised at the end .. and those pink lips go unkissed arrrrrrrrrrrrgh! ;)
E.

[Eve Ola]

a very nice write with great flow and yeah sad end :(

[Leslie Philibert]

like this very much. a poem that turns round at the end, neat, logical narrative with a sad message..well
done

[cycy]

" I know you love Pink, but you don't love me "....
well written sue,i loved this one and it tells a story though the end is pretty sad and you know i love PINK too :) :)

[stars are far]

haha yeah hun,, i know