Happy No Anniversary

Since everything end between you and I

I drown in tears and couldn’t be what I am.

 

I thought we were forever and until the end

But even our end hand an end.

 

It was all like a blink of an eye, it didn’t last

Nothing was planned like this , but !

 

Our first kiss was a memory non will forget

Neither you or I, or the tress that surrounded us.

 

One year ago, I thought we were forever again,

I thought your "I love you" was very true.

 

We enjoyed a night that was not like another

A hundred I loved you were said at that night.

 

All of our blessed prayers were about us

To be together until we reach the heavens above.

 

I felt the seventh skies are filled with my happiness

But they all of that clouds turned to black mist.

 

Here I am now, one year have passed.. and I'm alone

Lighting one candle, on one rotten cake.

 

With my tear falling over my table and my bed,

And the radio playing :

"I changed the presets in my truck

So those songs don’t sneak up

they still find me and remind me 

yeah you come back that easy...."

 

that song hit my heart in the middle

It hit me so hard as i fell down, crying.. dying..

 

"You told me you love me then why did you leave ?"

 

I miss us.. I miss you..

Happy anniversary .. Happy no anniversary 

Author's Note

the song is I still miss you , and the bold line is from a song by Taylor Swift , the song called "today was a fairytale".

one year ago we were togther, then he brokeup 6 month ago, so 30-7-2013 was when we were together, but now, its me alone..

I hope you like

Reviews

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

I'm so sorry you have suffered because of this person.
You should know that each one of us has a perfect partner out there somewhere.
You have opened your heart in this poem.
I'm sure that you will find the one who will love you unconditional.
Very best wishes.
Clive.

[Leslie Philibert]

I do...and to quote back, ...Hell has no fury as a woman scorned ( as Will said, maybe misquoted !)

[Eve Ola]

this read made me sad.. its hurtful.. but the write is good.. Keep up

[Tai Ryens]

The anguish of heartache has to be one of the most difficult as well as tormenting things to endure even after years, and you do a fine job of portraying so with this piece. Well done.

[Baby Ricochet]

Heartbreak is never easy. Good poem.

[wordman]

and a beautiful song it is

[Frieda P]

Heart wrenching read star, we've all been there at one time or another, the pain lingers on, you've written it aptly....

[Priscilla Nishi]

Captivating lines..its clearly seen how you have poured out your heart.. NYC work

[SVance]

We have all gone through bad breakups so I think this appeals to a lot of readers regardless of their background. It was well written and kept me reading til the end. It was a bit romantic for my tastes but I've been told plenty of times that I have bad tastes :-)