Our Infinity .

You told me you love me, then why did you leave ?

Like we are and how we used to be 

Happy and breathless while laughing

We were living in a fairy tale you and me

Dancing all over the green lands and smiling.

 

Then a storm came and hit that well tree

Took our names away to the hell and to Earth

We followed our cascade without being free

But you met her and took away my breath.

 

I wanted you at that time and needed you so bad

But you left me running alone through the meadows.

 

You died.. Died.. 

 

I stood under the moon beams calling your name

But God shot my voice down and said that an angel is needed

He took you to rest under his right hand away from any frame

I cried.. like hell, i sobbed , i died.. but i didn't have you back.

 

I smiled with tears in my eyes while my soul is saying goodbye.

When I was staring at your picture, you smiled at me.. 

I asked you with a crazy way:" where is our infinity gone now?"

I screamed ,shouted, but you didn't answer my calls, none.

 

God asked his new coming angel to go there and take my soul

I saw you there, I called your name, they said he is gone. I saw you.

I knew it was the end, but I followed you, I followed my destiny,

Went to tomb alone, slept there above you, forever.

 

When you said, Here is our infinity...

Author's Note

i was inspired while reading "The fault in our stars".
I hope you enjoy this :')

Reviews

[Kasey Miriam]

Beautiful writing. Sad and sweet

[RAOrourke]

bittersweet and beautiful. well done

[Eve Ola]

a very beautiful charming start with sad flow in end :( loving this write its great

[Tai Ryens]

What a poignant, touching love story you've written, stars. Not to mention it certainly captures the emotions felt whilst reading the novel itself. Especially the sudden death. Truly a well-written piece, keep it up!

[stars are far]

You know , actually i felt nothing while reading this, i mean there are more sad novels than this i didnt feel sad , but just this line, "you gave me a forever within the numbered days and im grateful" yeah that did give me lots to write, maybe just a little story .
thank you for your review :)

[Tai Ryens]

Nor did I, honestly, haha. I've read two novels by Green and I just think there are better ones, haha, although his novels are full of quotes that sound well when isolated.

[stars are far]

I didnt read any of his just this..but yes i do agree about the qoutes :)

[Ayushi]

Very enjoyable read... Every love story doesn't have a fairytale ending..
Great write ..

[wordman]

loved the read and the picture you painted

[stars are far]

sorry to say i didnt paint this, but thank you for your review :)

[Bhumika Devkota]

I like the poem, Is the book 'The Fault in Our Stars'' good? I am planing on reading it soon.

[stars are far]

well if you are a fan of John Green you will enjoy it, but i actually likes several lines not the whole way of expressing.. but it is an opinoion :)
thank you for your review

[A. Amos]

Read like a poignat love story...good read!