Until When ?

Through every day’s dream that fight the reality

And with every new word invented in this world.

I try to forget that I have to commit to my loyalty

And move on over your body to write a new love word.

 

But yet, my heart calls your name in its sleep and awake

My soul revive through your words and with every view.

I break, and die every time I try to forget you and take a break

Then I find myself again wishing that I didn’t meet you.

 

I  miss the day I met you in, and the day you left my sight

I call you and I say I need you my mighty knight

I love you each and every day under the light

But I cry over you and your love each night.

Author's Note

well, not perfect..but hope you like

Reviews

[Blue]

I have read your previous poems about grief over the loss of a lover and I can proudly say that you're improving. Especially in the quality of your poetry. Best wishes.

[Tai Ryens]

That urge to move onwards with your life conflicting with the antithesis of the same urge: to stay and wallow until, hopefully, they return. Poignant, well done.

[Kasey Miriam]

Wonderful emotion painted in this poem

[Kasey Miriam]

Wonderful emotion painted in this poem

[Kasey Miriam]

Wonderful emotion painted in this poem

[Kasey Miriam]

Wonderful emotion painted in this poem

[Kasey Miriam]

Wonderful emotion painted in this poem

[Kasey Miriam]

Wonderful emotion painted in this poem

[Kasey Miriam]

Wonderful emotion painted in this poem

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

It don't have to be perfect as long as it is sincere and besides we are human and so not perfect… I know that feeling of longing all to well. A wonderfully melancholy write.