Hey You

The worst thing you can every read

 

It’s been a while since I last met you

I can’t protest nor anything I can do.

I know I’m not the best to be for you,

But I’m sure no girl world ever sing for you like I do.

 

I can give you hundred reason why I love you

I can climb the mountain and the river I cross.

I can hit to the sun and sleep with the moon

Just for you I can do anything my honey.

 

Would we sing so loud every night

To be sure that our voices reach the heavens.

Hey baby sing with me every love song

And dance ,dance with me until we burn.

 

Say you’re happy, spend this night on the dance floor

When light comes back leave like nothing happened,

But this night, come to here , laugh like never

Hear that loud music and hit the stars with your dance steps.

 

Stare at me , move with my steps and learn how to be

A human for once, and a dance for a night

Hold me close and sing with me ,sing with the world

Be happy for once, feel free and let your body move.

 

Hit the dance floor and make it hot like you are

Be young ,feel wild and act really free.

Be yourself, let it all out. Tonight, hit the dance floor

Hit the stars and dance until dawn ,then goodbye .

Author's Note

A happy writing ,not my style..but try hahaha
so thank you for your time :D

Reviews

[Blue]

In the end, it's as if the speaker does not intend to encounter the person again. Like it's goodbye forever. Haha. I used to do this, flirting with a guy at the bar and when the night is over, it's as if nothing really happened. 'Then goodbye' eh. ;)

[Kasey Miriam]

Cute and sweet. Very nice poem. Good job

[bouncing]

Love this love story and written in a poem, very good work and I'm proud of you :)

[stars are far]

Thank You very much :)

[Stefanie Holmes]

"But I’m sure no girl world ever sing for you like I do." 'World' should be 'would' in this line.

"I can give you hundred reason why I love you
I can climb the mountain and the river I cross.
I can hit to the sun and sleep with the moon
Just for you I can do anything my honey." A few lines in this stanza don't make complete sense. Maybe some rewording needs done?

This poem had a very beautiful concept! I enjoyed it. :)

~Stefanie

[Leslie Philibert]

An excellent poem that races along, as fast as a dance...

[maria ( rose)]

Be young ,feel wild and act really free. Love it!! that's my motto in life!!! lol
love the feel of this moving poem. awesome job stars :D
maria rose♥

[Tai Ryens]

I like your ending, it truly was exuberant and lovely. One other particular aspect I enjoyed was the reference to self-loathing, yet also expressing your knowledge of your own worth quite well. Well done.

[Einstein Noodle]

ahhhhhhh! to give up permanence for one night of bliss ... it is very tempting after a long and fruitless search for love is it not!?? i enjoyed the analogy/metaphor of dance to love ..it is perfect .. and the pic is beautiful ..
E.