Time And Us

when time fades away and you leave my way

When the dust of our memories flies so far away

with the west wind it mingles and become no more gray

When that time comes I will no more be asking you to stay.

 

When leaves fall apart and little children no more fart

When a nerd is no more the one who is so smart

When you and I are thinking of a new start

That is when my heart will be with say you were right.

 

Time is passing by and life is moving on not waiting for me

So why should I keep pausing on every picture of thee

I know I deserve more than what you have given to me

And the love I deserve must grow like a seed, flower and tree.

 

I will never think that you be again a part of my soul

Though I gave a piece and you threw it like it has no role

You broke my heart to take a piece and continue to reach your goal

So hey beautiful, I hope you get everything you desire and never fall.

Author's Note

You know I'm bad in grammar, but I hope that you like this.
and yeah some of you might say to get over it, but well its my inspiration and it is not love or something ,it maybe just feelings that are inside..haha
I wish him the best ,honestly :)

Hope you like it :)

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

You speak so well of the grief that envelopes us often in the aftermath of such a shocking event, one that rocks us off our feet and forces us to see things how they are, and yet still wish the doer of the actions well in the name of the love we still harbor for the person. Well expressed, I enjoyed.

[Kasey Miriam]

Wonderfully written. You do so well at expressing the emotions involed in each poem

[Eve Ola]

A very beautiful ending "So hey beautiful, I hope you get everything you desire and never fall"
keep writing !!

[Stephen]

Ha! Sweety .. there`s only me who`d always say.. c'mmon burnt that freaking pal out into the ashes and c'mmon get over it. So, yeah .. just let him go and welcome what wants to come with much love in your real life making you happy. I won`t ever say that I like reading this piece because there`s so much pain behind this write so, How can I say I enjoy reading this piece? No way! But yeah, I`d love to say that this`s well penned with the words with such .. such deep meanings. All stanzas are beautifully penned with your raw emotions. I`d look forward reading your stuffs, Sweety.

[MsJewel]

Very creative! You have a kind heart to wish someone well that has hurt you...I'm not so sure I could do that -

:) Julie

[Carla]

Terrific. And the fart line really made me laugh. Very creative

[Leslie Philibert]

The fart line is great..( no longer fart might be better), and shows that there is nothing you can not write about..like this...

[Einstein Noodle]

would never tell someone to just get over it ... healing takes as long as it takes .. the beauty of writing is that you can say the same thing in many different ways ... especially in poetry where we have all those forms and tools to choose from ..
"...and little children no more fart" i would change that phrase .. it takes away from the seriousness of your poem .. since that line starts with reference to leaves maybe something that continues with that thought ... like leaves fall apart at winter's start ... or something like that .. just a suggestion :)
E.

[stars are far]

Hehe yes..it will be better..but that triggered through my tears..and smiled and typed that.. thank you so much for you comment :)

[wordman]

a great job, and yeah just another phase of life w come and we go leaving behind memories