I Can Fall Again

With the soul that rises at dawn and sets with sun

With the smiles that cheers a broken heart, and make fun

My heart sends to you its love and its mercy

Regarding all what I  had given you from jealousy .

 

You never looked at my eyes and spelled your magic

You just gave me a break and talked to her with no logic

Ignoring the fire in my eyes and the burn in my soul

All what you did was cross my line and follow your goal.

 

You denied my presence when you needed me so bad

I just gave you all what you want and you still hate me ,that’s sad.

But I never minded you doing this or that honey

Since to you, our love story was just so funny.

 

I know you never loved me but look at the stars begging you

And the moons are shaping your face while dreaming about you,

Every atom in this planet is needing your love ,so I do

So hey baby, look at my eyes once and I will fall for you.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[ms. barrie]

deeply moving write, beautiful imagery...very relateable
that has engaging impact yet weaves eloquent delicateness.
my favorite lines:

"You denied my presence when you needed me so bad

I just gave you all what you want and you still hate me ,that’s sad.

But I never minded you doing this or that honey

Since to you, our love story was just so funny.



I know you never loved me but look at the stars begging you

And the moons are shaping your face while dreaming about you,

Every atom in this planet is needing your love ,so I do

So hey baby, look at my eyes once and I will fall for you."


amazing poem...thanks for sharing! :)

[Stephen]

Umm .... Reading your stuffs`s an honor to me and I find much emotions in your writes. I think, you still in a love of your ex which`s why you kept posting such kinda beautiful stuffs in a memory of him .. he`d be happy with someone else or not .. no one cares, but you have to be happy staying away from his old memories if you really want to make your future bright. Living in his old memories, praising his love and the things he done with you .. would never help you making your tom. filled with shine .. you`d always get lost or stuck in the past .. into his memories and find nothing except misery so as a suggestion .. i`d say ... just let him burn out into the ashes with his all old memories and re-start your own life in some new creative ways .. giving a right track to your beautiful life.

Stay blessed!
The poem`s again having much emotions in all lines ... which showing the pond of tears.

[Aethereal]

He brings out the love mood in her, but she doesn’t do the same for him. The mutual chemistry just isn't there in his case. What she doesn’t know is how many secret admirers she has who are too shy to tell her how she makes them feel when she’s nearby. Sometimes admirers will stay away out of fear of rejection because they secretly don’t think that they are worthy of her attention.

[David Scott]

"Just one look us all it took"...
I felt the calling of your heart in your words.

[Sami Khalil]

A heartfelt and romantic poem. You shape the dreams of yourself and your future. Excellent...:)..........

[Pax]

the last sentence will melt anyone's heart... i guess any relationship that had gone broken deserves a second chance... this is so lovely my friend, sweet and cute.

[don't know]

Another beautiful poem written from the heart. With some nice imagery throughout the poem .The last stanza especially stands out for me.

[stars are far]

Thank you :D