When You Died

I wiped like never and felt like an orphan

As you are gone now baby to the other land

I had to cure myself with morpheme

But no cure was able to understand.

 

They ripped you in peace with the earth

It hugs you so tight ,but I can’t go with it in a fight

I see you there my eyes tears and my heart burns

Shall it be the other plot of “Wuthering height”?.

 

On a late Friday night where we used to meet

I sat alone there crying and calling your name

No one reached me while I was remembering you feet

How they used to walk me and make me insane.

 

I went there to your grave and crying like hell

I missed your face and that’s when the craziness begin

I opened your tomb and stared at your face hun

You were shinier than the moon and he’s jealous again.

 

I took you from there and hugged your dead body

I kissed your cold forehead and hugged your chest

I smelled you like I used to do and I cried again and again

I held your hand and lied on top of you forever my crest .

Author's Note

That was inspired by Emilys Bronte's "Wuthering Heights"
Hope you like

Reviews

[Stephen]

~~ Freaking Hell ~~
So, emotional and painful. Your stuffs are the ocean of tears indeed. Honey, let`s get off these tears & try to live a life ~~ with some new ways.

Stay blessed!

[Stefanie Holmes]

I really like that you wrote this based off of Emily Bronte! That is a really creative twist and I love to see people interpret things in their own way. This was really good and I truly enjoyed the read!

~Stefanie

[Tai Ryens]

Tragic and so marvelously conveyed in a saddened tone . . .
I shall also add that I do so enjoy Wuthering Heights, aha. Well done.

[Pax]

sad but beautifully conveyed. I like it...

[Kasey Miriam]

Beautifully sad poem. very full of emotion

[MsJewel]

A beautiful poem, heart touching with sadness.
You need to read over a few lines - just a few typos

:) Julie

[wordman]

such a sad poem here on mothers day eve it was well written

[AMMD]

Wuthering Heights is one of my favorite works. Well done!