Don't You Feel There Is Something Missing ?

just something

Can’t you feel  my fingertips triggering through your soul

Calling your name to save me from each world fall,

Was it too easy to forget and change the highway you were in

Or was I not even a companion from the first begin ?

 

Here you go standing, staring and diving in our first meeting place

Don’t you feel there is something missing and there is a lot of space.

Doesn't your heart whisper the  words that I sand here in the middle of all the blues.

“They don’t know about the things we do, they don’t know about the I love yous”.

 

I cried on that stone baby, it hugged me so tight to save me from your steps

When I passed from there the trees wiped like never on my footsteps

Asking me about you ,no answer was spelled but tears

They broke the silence and killed every lover fierce.

 

No hug was given to me neither any warm kiss was sent

Just me ,your memories and every love print .

Don’t you feel that there is something missing in the air

Me, your real self, or just our small laughs and giggles.

 

I can’t believe how that monster killed you and possessed your soul

That was never you, and leaving me was never your goal.

Just give one real answer what happened to us after every vow?

Is it me, your heart or someone that lives in your heart and hid my glow?

Author's Note

Hope you like :)

Reviews

[Stephen]

What the stunning witchy pitchy witch you are! ~~ S**t ~~

~~Freaking Hell ~~

I read this write as a rap song (Hey, it`s R-A-P NOT R-A-P-E) *Wink*
Very cool song, I simply much enjoyed this write, i`ve never read something like this before, it`s emotional but I, the hell yeah, read or screamed this write with much enjoy. Thanks for sharing this sexy piece with others ~~ dropping over this seductive writing site.

*Wink*
~~ Freaking Hell ~~ I enjoyed this write!

[David Scott]

Oh yes, I have known this in my own life.
Sometimes we do loose ourselves and we cannot even see it is within our own soul where something missing.
Beware, it happens all too easily...

[MsJewel]

The emotion in your words touched my heart. I can tell this was written from a painful place.

Great writing my friend

:) Julie

[Kasey Miriam]

Beautifully written and expression of emotion! wonderful job dear and may you keep up the lovely work.

[Leslie Philibert]

I do, great use of fonts, original !

[Ankit Kumar]

Emotional...nice connection of emotions...great work

[Carla]

Wow, this was amazing. I can feel the emotion

[Carla]

Wow, this was amazing. I can feel the emotion

[Carla]

Wow, this was amazing. I can feel the emotion

[Carla]

Wow, this was amazing. I can feel the emotion