Rest In Forever

Through all the days that we will pass 

And every night light we will save

Through every dream we will to have 

Our biggest dream will be in the forever,

 

Every one promises about that forever

"I want to be forever your friend"

"I want to marry you until forever"

And so many forever's they promise.

 

I want to go to that forever land

I want to build me a castle and rest there

I want to drive there and settle under the skies

I want to stay there waiting in the forever.

 

I will wait for you to reach my place

To reach my arms and stay with me

They is no ever after that place

So sweety,live your life ,Im waiting for you in the forever .

Author's Note

For My Bestie <3 Noosti :D

Reviews

[AMMD]

Those amazing types of friends are few and far between :)

[Raymond Federle]

A wonderful write on friendship! :)

[cycy]

this one is just too cute Sue,, i lovey

[Tai Ryens]

You write the most lovely dedications, stars. Well done,

[Leslie Philibert]

Like this too, clever the use of the article with forever. (Might be worth using sweetheart, or my sweet, sweety has ( I feel) a slightly ironical touch)

[melissa]

This is a beautiful poem keep up the great work and keep sending me more to read i love reading them

[Jack Kennedy]

Good job I must say. Well done in my opinion.

[A. Amos]

Love your romantic soul and every single word pouring out from your heart...

[wordman]

a beautiful tribute to your bestie I think forever is now tomorrow never comes for today is testerdays tomorrow

[MsJewel]

Lovely thoughts surround your poetry. This is beautiful. The only change I would make is to take "me" out of I want to build me a castle - I think it reads better, but that may be personal preference. A stunning poem!

:) Julie