I Want To Grow Old With You

I want to grow old with you

 

Until our sun sets down behind this sea

And our skies turn to black and we be free,

Until our names are called by God

I will be there for you through every flood.

 

When wrinkles hits your hands and face

I will be there calling you my holy grace.

When brown lines are covering your eyes

I will call you beautiful and remove all disguise.

 

Each sun ray will draw your name on the hill 

When it raise and call you my lovely sir.

I will hold your hand and walk by you to the end 

No matter who is there and how much I bend.

 

I will hold every tooth that falls from your sweet mouth

Put it there in the temple of my happiness being your spouse.

I will wash your face every day when you wake up and kiss your old lips

I will hold you tight and make you feel like there is something you miss.

 

I want to grow old with you my lovely man

Die laying in your arms and do all what I can

To make your life the best you can ever live

I want to be your love, wife and your mistress.

 14/4/2014 ;8;40 pm .

Author's Note

I was inspired to write this from the song "I wanna grow old with you "By Westlife.
I hope you enjoy this :)

Reviews

[Bowers]

This is beautiful, very romantic, and sweet. a truly powerful piece, full of love and emotion. I hope I find someone to spend my life with, growing old together, dealing with the struggles together, being happy together.. you've written a wonderful piece here!

[stars are far]

I wish that too hehe.. that would be the best love..
thank you for reading this :)

[Bowers]

:) your very welcome!

[No regret]

very nice ! n ya song is great inspired a lot of people like u n me .

your lines took me back to 2001 high school days .. keep writing :)

[Brianna Brie]

Until our sun sets down behind this sea
And our skies turn to black and we be free,
Until our names are called by God
I will be there for you through every flood.

The first verse is awesome in every way. You really drive home the old part in the those last two verses. In today's society, people do not think of old as sexy or desirable, but you are adventurous by going there and happen to capture the true meaning of commitment with a spouse. Nice job!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Now that is a gorgeous piece.This is what true love is,Having you and accepting you and loving you even when you have wrinkles and your teeth begin to fall out and your hair is gone.

[maria ( rose)]

awwwYes!! music to my ears,, love that song!!! You sure did a brilliant job with this poem ~ awesome write!
thank you for sharing..
maria

[Raymond Federle]

A loving warm poem well done! :)

[Tai Ryens]

To grow old with somebody is a dream that many of us can share, this truly is a very romantic and gentle, well done.

[MsJewel]

This is so sweet and romantic. A beautiful love story in the making...and I adore the pictures you chose to accompany your lovely words.

:) Julie

[melissa]

This is a beautiful poem keep up the great work and keep sending me more to read i love reading them