I Miss It All

I Miss It All

 

Your brown eyes that turn my cheeks to red ones

Your gentle smile that makes me burn and fly

Your lovely hair that break my bones when I touch

And every word you said to me, I miss so much.

 

Your tan skin and you cherry lovely lips

Your kind heart and your yummy kiss,

Your soft touch and your one million smell,

And  your hands over mine ,I miss so much.

 

The way you look at me and make me laugh

And when you make me a child and give me a nap,

The way you gave me chocolate and took my chips

I miss it all, with the day I first met you.

 

They way you used to smile and make me melt

And your words that carried me on a white horse,

Every dream and every day I spent with you

I miss all of that, but mostly baby, I miss you.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[cycy]

i couldnt agree more with anyone on this and i am just going to echo ravyne..the heart wants what it wants

[Ravyne Hawke]

the heart wants what the heart wants... missing someone is always difficult but you penned your loss so beautifully

[Will Neill]

Star, a nice flow of words (few little errors) well done.
Will

[stars are far]

Can you please point them out for me..
I will be thankful
and thank you

[Will Neill]

Star, nothing to serious-I think you meant to write 'your' instead of 'you cherry lips' --'your one million smell'--I'm not sure what you mean by that. other wise well done.
Will

[stars are far]

Thank u . I actually forgot to correct that..
And the one million is a name of perfume

[Cryingkate]

Nice write..
I caught a little something,, Did you mean to write Your cherry instead of You Cherry?

Your tan skin and you cherry lovely lips

100/100

[Leslie Philibert]

I admire the way you write so well in English...

[Latifa]

very emotionel piece from you star, great write I like the way it flows

[Blood Ink Diary]

You truly manifested the sweet-ache of emotions rather aptly in verse. It's not easy to convey such emotions all at once, but, you have written it rather wonderfully. You have fine ink ! Cheers

[Pax]

expressive piece, my friend, just pour it all down into writing, its a great release from the emotional burdens of heartbreak... keep penning those thoughts...

[MsJewel]

I could feel the longing in your bittersweet and beautiful words.
Lovely poetry my friend.

:) Julie

[Dhaye]

Sweet and romantic. Well-penned.