The Little Daffodils

Standing on that hill of the bushy trees

Looking around to see those daffodils smile without fears.

Hugging the nature flowers and happily dance

Jumping, laughing and to me they give their glance.

 

You feel like you’re owning the world when you sit there

Between their words and their happy talk you stare,

At those glittery eyes, and feel lost in their beauty

They call you lovely ,sweetie and others call you cutie.

 

You walk between those flowers and smell their nectar

A flower from behind hugs you tight ,other from front,

You feel happy and can’t resist this lovely bond

A kiss that is blown from here and there with love.

 

Those flowers will one day grow and make trees

Their glittery eyes will be the sun and the rays

Those smiles will be the moons and the clouds

And with all of their love, a tomorrow will be built.

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

This is written about kids and inspired by them ...
after my few practice days in teaching :) i totally loved them :$ hehe.. I cant forget their smiles :$ and the way they laugh :$
hope you like

Reviews

[Kenaz]

Yearning for childhood is a curse we shall bear. I barely remember those days when I look into the busy streets. It is good to be reminded of things past, and yet to come. Thanks
-K

[Ravyne Hawke]

Wonderful expression of your day with those kids.. beautifully written

[Katherine]

Really cute and nice Im inspiredd

[Stefanie Holmes]

Kids are such a joy in this world. The are so innocent and sweet... quite funny at times too!

I enjoyed this write!

~Stefanie

[Patricia Wedel]

dear 'stars'... Children dance into the world...
where flowers bloom and smiles caress our
heart. So beautiful that the children have
a teacher who understands that we are part
of nature and will blossom and grow
into great oak trees where knowledge
will fall as acorns to be gathered and
shared for generations to come. Amen...
truly... Pat

[Kasey Miriam]

positivly heartfelt lovely piece

[Tai Ryens]

What a beautiful poem about children, may they bloom to form a meadow one day that will inspire future generations.

[Leslie Philibert]

Fine job, like the subject, reminds me of WW...!

[A. Amos]

Neatly Writen piece and above verses felt deeply in heart...good job my friend