Thank You For Your Stabs

Should I imprison you for a year or two

In my lines of poetry and with what's true..

That you lied to me and betrayed my trust,

Should I lie to myself and say that you were faithful ?

 

You lied to me ,you made me live a lie

And let me believe every word you said

My faith in you had vanished when I knew it all

I knew the truth and what I meant to you…

 

I was only a game ,is that right?

I was killed by every vow you have given me

I was poisoned by every touch between us

You put your spell on my soul and then left .

 

And now you are telling me that I must not trust anyone .

Is that a joke or you are being sarcastic ?

After you lied to me, I don’t even trust myself..

I don’t trust anyone..not any single human ..

 

Are you telling me now that I must not go out with a guy .

Is that what you are afraid of? You are scared you might lose me

Or you are scared I might be hurt by him or any lie..

Don’t worry.. your lies made it all..you killed me ..

 

THANK YOU .

Author's Note

Yes.. That's it..
I hope you enjoy it ..any review will be appreciated :)
Thank you very much :)

Reviews

[Blue]

Direct and frank with no intention to hold back the anger of the betrayal. I feel your pain.

[Bowers]

very meaningful, I love this, I can totally relate... and the lies will forever be etched into my heart, how CAN we trust again after something like that? Great write

[stars are far]

I dont trust anymore.. not anyone ...
So i guess its all setled with me.. Thank you for your kind review :)

[Bowers]

your very welcome, and I dont trust anyone either ;)

[Tai Ryens]

Definitely sorrowing that one man has hurt you and then expects you to stay with him and cling onto him needily despite it . . . Well done, you express yourself well Suhad, keep it up.

[cycy]

omg Star, this is just so sad..i feel the emotions right through the words :(

[Latifa]

Should I imprison you for a year or two
In my lines of poetry and with what's true..
I love the opennig

[Leslie Philibert]

a personal write, from the heart, complex and thoughtful

[MsJewel]

So much emotion in this well written poem. Your creativity shines.

:) Julie

[Stefanie Holmes]

When someone hurts us and destroys our trust it can leave a permanent black smudge on our lives. I can feel the hurt and betrayal in this piece. You conveyed it well.

~Stefanie

[Nusquam Esse]

A few small typos, figured I would point out for you. Use imprison instead of prison, you forgot an apostrophe on what's, remove the have in front of vanished, it should be had not have in front of given.

[stars are far]

thank you very much :)
I corrected those :) Thank you :)