Desperate For You

What was my mistake?

What have I done to you?

Why did you leave me?

Don’t you know that you are

My life my breath and my soul?

Don’t you know that im here

Just to be yours ,just to love you…?

Why did you do this to me?

Don’t you know I'm here alone?

Desperate for you ..not for love

But your love… your love …

Why don’t you be one of those

Secret admirers that message me?

And give it a shot to see my faith

My faith in you and in our love..

It seems to be crazy for me

And im sure to everyone else

But I love you ..i love YOU ..I LOVE YOU

Please ..come back to me ..

Author's Note

It's not my style of writing..its just a random thing that came to me...
Thank you for you time

Reviews

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

I like this poem just expressing emotions that are making me a bit emotional because i feel the same way too...longing for someone to come back to me...

[Blue]

You really let it all out on this one, Suhad. My, your poems are making me sad.

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Im very sorry for that ..they still make me cry :(
I think we passed through the same moments.. :(

[Tai Ryens]

Blaming yourself because there exists nothing else to shift the blame onto . . . You express yourself well, Suhad. Keep it up.

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Thank you very much..:)

[Raven Madd]

Very emotional, and I can certainly relate to this feeling. When that one person you care about more in the world suddenly decides they don't need you anymore, the feeling of abandonment and confusion, wondering what you did to make that happen and what you can do to fix it. And then you find you can't fix it....so you move on.
Life is weird that way sometimes.
But that's why we have poetry to express those feelings that we find so hard to deal with by ourselves.

[Katherine]

Very nice poem better than I could wrote it on that topic

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thank you very much

[untitledramblings]

For some reason I imagined that those first few lines were being yelled. It worked well in my mind. And the last two lines made me think of a girl pulling her boyfriend or whoever back by the arm, begging him to stay. . . Overall, I liked it. Especially 'Don't you know I'm here alone? Desperate for you, not for love, but you're love.' Loved it!

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you imagined that well..
thank you so much

[Great Aunt Astri]

Ah, the emotions and apirations of young love ... don't we all remember that well. I think the poem could be a bit more 'crafted''. But if it came straight from the heart, I am sure it makes you feel better?

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yeah i acyually wrote that randomly as i said..i didnt even re-read it..because then i will be putting un real emotions..
thank you so much

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Awesome work...

Keep Sharing!!

Good Wishes!!

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thank you so much :)

[Barbara Gilmer]

there is always a freshness about the pain of heartbreak. You wrote it well. enjoyed the read. Barbara

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thank you very much :)
i appreciate you passing by :)