Crying Is My Only Word

Do  you believe that last night I was crying

Yeah ,crying over you ..I am still…

While you were talking to here .. flirting

I was there in my bed.. cold and lonely dying…

 

My soul was calling for the death angel

To come and take me back home .

Take me to a place where I can protect you

And I can look after you with an eye that will never sleep.

 

Would you please, look backward to yesterday

When we were running at the beach together

Hand in hand like we were the title of forever

I can’t stop thinking, dreaming about yesterday .

 

I really weep and cry ,more than anything else

And cry end up being the only word that is easy to type.

You said you don’t want us to say goodbye

But haven’t you noticed that you are gone..

 

Come back please, just for once and revive me

Refresh my soul and give me the kiss of life

Let me live between your arms just for the whole life time

And I promise ,I promise, I will keep you my one in this whole world 

Author's Note

Is it easy ? or am i just dreaming that one day it will be easy ? :'(
I promise i never felt such happiness and such sadness before you :(

Reviews

[Pax]

I believed that to cry or crying your way out of deep sadness reliefs any tension in the mind and heart. Like they say : “crying is healthy” – scientific survey shows it is a stress reliever.

“cry, cry until it runs out dry”

I believe that everything happens for a reason. Being heartbroken seems to be an aching pain that every night or every time you remembered something that both of you shared together makes your tears to flow. But that’s okay it is normal form of grieving of what you’ve lost or the things that didn’t work-out.

This piece implies there were mistakes made, and it was too late to go back to yesterday to fixed it. Or you’ve just realized how important that someone now that you’ve lost him.

“Come back please, just for once and revive me
Refresh my soul and give me the kiss of life”

Smiles, reminds me that being broken hearted, in expressing ourselves, it feels like we were dead inside that the only thing can revive us is the love we always wanted.

“Is it easy ? or am i just dreaming that one day it will be easy ?”

You mean is the pain will ease and be easy to bring in time? Yes, it will be, and then you’ll find someone else to try again, to love again much stronger than the old one.

“I promise i never felt such happiness and such sadness before you”

Promises are often meant to be broken. If a relationship didn’t work-out that only means that there is much better for you in the future. A better friends and a much wonderful partner.

Very nice piece my friend.

[stars are far]

thank you very much ..and promises..maybe because he the first one i gave a promise to seems to me it must not be broken..even after we are apart..
thank you so much

[Pax]

it must be hard...
your welcome my friend.

[Lily Mae]

As always your vivid emotions come alive for your readers.. well done... Raw and passionate..xo

[stars are far]

Thank you xoxo

[untitledramblings]

Sometimes promising to be his one and only isn't enough. Some guys take what they have for granted. I think it's crazy how they dot realize what they have until it's gone. Sorry for my little rant lol, but I like this one. It's bringing back memories and I don't particularly like that about it, but it's still good nevertheless and reminds me to stay strong and remember that there are people going through what I went through. I hope you feel better soon. :)

[stars are far]

actually i want him to realize what he means to me :(, even when it is late ,im okay with that .. read moreactually i want him to realize what he means to me :(, even when it is late ,im okay with that ..
and well..even when i know that someone else is feeling what i do.. i know they will be fine..time can heal a broken heart..but well... thank you :)

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

Awww, this is so so sad, bless you. I split with my girl last night, I can truly relate. Aw, such a beautiful piece of emotional poetry.

[stars are far]

thank you so much.. and yeah it is sad..but then you get used to it ..and well you will move on.. trust me..it just needs time..hope you find the best :) and sorry for that

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

Yw. It sure is and yes, you sure do. Thank you :)

[Katherine]

Amazing..yet again:D and so sorry about the saddness that came after the happiness ive experienced it too:) Great poem !!

[stars are far]

thank you very much :)
and yeah it is the toughest sadness

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

What a lovely piece of poetry.. :-)

Keep Sharing..

Good Wishes..!!

[stars are far]

thank you so much :)

[Robert Strzalko]

The pain you're feeling comes through clearly in this piece. It could be something you imagined and wrote but it feels like a real life experience to me.

[stars are far]

thank you so much ..
and that was a real think that happened ..but inked with my emotions ..read morethank you so much ..
and that was a real think that happened ..but inked with my emotions ..
thank you so much :)

[cycy]

aaawww, so much sadness in just one poem, i really feel the pain in the words.. the poem is full of so much raw emotion and im glad that you can let it out through poetry dear.

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Thank you dear ')

[don't know]

This is sad poem love is a beautiful thing. But its a double edged sword you have to take the risk and fall in love but when it goes wrong it makes you scared to love again so you don't feel such sadness again.

[stars are far]

yeah we risk it but i always loose
thank you

[don't know]

never give up hope its a risk we have to take. one day you will win. Another heart felt poem.