The Red Day

Here is it another red skies,another balloons everywhere

Where you can see those youth swans here and there

Those red flowers are in every corner and in every hand

And those love birds are flying to ecstasy with no limits.

 

And here I am looking at them all with my teary eyes

Not because I’m alone or because the crowd is red

But because I’m sure you are there holding her red flower

And hugging her so tight just like we used to do..

 

Can’t you think for at least on second about me

Or what am I doing ?or with whom I want to be ?

Could you believe that you were the one I want today?

And the one I want him to be my forever Valentine.

 

Every year like this day I’m here at the same place

Crying over him and wishing I was his date.

I was never given that red rose that everyone holds

Is it because I’m not like them or is it because I’m more than a girl .

 

My only wish for this Valentine is you and your smile

I wish I was the flower you give to your lovely babe

I wish I was the sun that shines your way

And the moon light that you stay awake with her all night .

Author's Note

Yup..happy valentine for him :)

Reviews

[zainul]

A true love can't leave a passionate heart like yours.
I adore your profound love and appreciate how you expressed in this nicely crafted piece.

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thank you very much

[zainul]

You are most welcome.

[Pax]

sad, this piece reminds us your readers, that we all go through heartbreaks, and wishing it never did end... On a special day, red colors or anything that reminds us of love, the memory burns in our head, wishing it didn't end...

It is a good poem my friend, it has a heart of its own, saying to us its lonely to have no one in valentines day... but we all know, the good days will come, when we lose someone we love, there will be someone will be much better. It is like, we have lost today, but in the future we will earned a good one, much better one...

very nice piece!
@Pax

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thank you so much :)))
i appreciate your words

[untitledramblings]

I really have no words to describe this. You are great.

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aww thank you ..*blushing* you really made my day :)

[Blue]

True love is wishing him happiness even if it means he has to be with someone else.

Better days are coming. :)

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well... yeah ..but it hurts :(
thank you for your time beautiful

[Tai Ryens]

Sweet, appealing, captivating, and poignant . . . The pleas of an immature love, the kind in which we all long for. Well done, you write this one with depth.

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thank you for your time :)

[Dayran]

An appealing ... winsome ... almost childlike tone in the poem ... that lends to it the unmistakable note of innocence ... and a love that ... reaches for the skies ... as much as the depths of the oceans. Happy Valentine ... sar

[Leslie Philibert]

Like this ; a poem written with nice balanced lines and good quatrians, that ( maybe ) needs rhymes..

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Thank you for your review.. and well what I wanted to send in this poem is my feelings towards him in this day ,and well i hope him a happy one even when im not his valentine :)
thank you again