Is That The End ?

Is that they way you want to end

You and I are going to bend

For the future that lays ahead

Or for your own whims and dread?

Don't you think that it is wrong to say goodbye

Since without you I can never fly

To the ecstasy and the sky

I can never say that painful bye .

Could you give one litle clue

why should i give up and lose you ?

Or should I just stop being a glue

And move on over you ?

I don't want our love to have an end

Because thats not the way i planed it 

I never wanted you to leave my head

But now, can you let me enjoy my last sleep in this bed.

 

Author's Note

I don't have words to say...but i still want him :(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((

Reviews

[Witty Fay]

Your longing is touching. And your writing is riveting.

[stars are far]

thank you for your time :)))

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

End is not easy.. We always hope to have an ongoing life with loved ones..!!

Good write..!!

Keep Sharing..!!

Good Wishes..!!

[FallenHeroXx]

This is one of the best poems i've read in a while.

"Could you give one litle clue
why should i give up and lose you ?
Or should I just stop being a glue
And move on over you ?"

Best stanza.

Peace!
100/100
Fallen!

[stars are far]

Thank u so much

[Leslie Philibert]

Like this, might be worth putting a question mark at the end of L1, apart from that fine job.

[Dayran]

In the seasons of the seas there's the high and then the low tides ... and it moves in cycles ... that is its nature. Nice.

[Tai Ryens]

You portray your longing and emotions elegantly, well done.

[chaotic katie]

Such powerful longing in this piece. it sounds quite personal. Hope everything begins to look up for you.