10 Things I Hate About You

I hate it when your silent 

And when you hide your words.

I hate it when you ignore me 

Then come back like nothing were.

I hate it when you lie to me 

Then say the truth 

I hate it when you walk by 

Then come back to say hi.

I hate it when we don't chat 

For day or two.

I hate it when you don't call

Or even say I miss you.

I hate it when you smoke 

And when you drink.

I hate the fact that whatever you do

I can never hate you.

Author's Note

It was inspired from the movie "10 things i hate about you "
And the poem that was said :

"I hate the way you talk to me,
And the way you cut your hair.
I hate the way you drive my car,
I hate it when you stare.
I hate your big dumb combat boots
And the way you read my mind.
I hate you so much it makes me sick,
It even makes me rhyme.
I hate the way you're always right,
I hate it when you lie.
I hate it when you make me laugh,
Even worse when you make me cry
I hate it when you're not around,
And the fact that you didn't call
But mostly I hate the way I don't hate you,
Not even close,
Not even a little bit,
Not even at all."

I know mine isnt that good..but well i gave it a try .. thank you :)

Reviews

[untitledramblings]

I feel like this poem came straight from your heart. It speaks to me; it's very relatable, and that's why I love it. Especially that last line, "I hate the fact that whatever you do I can never hate you." Oh gosh I think I might cry. Lol but that was beautiful.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good try.. Inspiration can be from anywhere, anyone.. :-)

Keep Sharing!!

Good Wishes!!

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thannk you so much :)

[Robertstevenson]

Beautifully sweet or perhaps bittersweet. Was drawn to the title as i loved this moment in the movie. You have done it so much justice. Love your version!

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thank you..
and oh the movie in this moment is very amazing ..it made me cry hehe *tears*
read morethank you..
and oh the movie in this moment is very amazing ..it made me cry hehe *tears*
but was very sweet ..thank you so much

[cycy]

i like your poem a lot. its really sweet and adorable and stands true. we all have those little things we hate about our significant other. i especially lyk e last bit...thumbs up from me

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thank you so much :)

[Tai Ryens]

Both pieces are quite lovely, and I particularly like how you emphasize that detesting only parts of a whole is certainly possible without simultaneously loving the whole . . . Well done.

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thank you tai :)

[Leslie Philibert]

Like both poems..a good subject about living together and ambivalence..

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thank you mr :)