I Became Forever Yours

A Poem by stars are far

As we were walking by the river

Where the moon is staring at us

And the fish singing its last song

While the flowers dance for them..

You picked a dancer and bowed down

You started at my eyes as the sky record,

The music got louder and the breeze colder,

As the moon got shy and you forwarded by ,

A simple smile and a deep word was said

“Will You Marry Me ?” you expelled…

As you showed me a ringed that was given by you mom

You said it’s mine as I shacked my head for a “yes” answer..

I looked at your eyes so deep and saw an ocean

It was filled of words and feelings and promises

I couldn’t hold my heart as it popped me to your arms

I was like a prisoner who just felt freedom..

As our wedding sermon continue ….

I kissed you after you became my forever home

I hugged you as you become my only place

And one that river side.. I became forever yours ..

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© 2014 stars are far

Author's Note

For my dear sweet lover .., Hope that one day come <3 and i truely be forever yours :)
Enjoy read ..and thanks for your time :)

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Robert Strzalko

It's very romantic. I bet all of the girls reading this like it very much. It captures the essence of what girls yearn for. At least that's the way it seems to me. They all want to find that special guy and get married. I couldn't tell if this really happened or if it was something you imagined. Either way, the emotion comes through with clarity.

Posted 11 Years Ago

11 Years Ago

thank you so much ...and nah that was just imagination :)

Dayran

Reads like a marriage of Khiamat and Marduk or Radha and Krishna. Nice.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Priyankaabhilaashi

Beautifully written.. Wishes come true one day is the only wish we live by..

Posted 11 Years Ago

Tai Ryens

Ah, memories of the river where he had proposed are still raging strong within the husband's eyes, and I'm no stickler for tradition, but I enjoyed the sense of history you provide to the reader. Well done, I quite enjoyed this.