I Will Be There

I Will Be There

A Poem by stars are far

When the light beams and the clouds wave goodbye,
When the night arrives and the moon start his journey,
I will follow you wherever you are and whatever you do
I will be there calling you and following your leads .
When you wake up at night because of a night dream
I will be there holding your hand and hugging you so tight.
When you feel cold and don't find a blanket 
I will be there to make your veins feel warm with a touch .
When your day is dim and your sun is hiding
I will be there to to search for it and light your day .
When your nights are torturing you and filling you with sadness
I will be there to fight for your happiness and make you fine.
When your day are not worth counting I will be there 
To make them know that they are the days of a prince
That is building his kingdom and his castle is a gold mine
Because it owns what's more precious than gold,which is you .

© 2013 stars are far


Author's Note

stars are far
For you my love ....
Hope you like it :)

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The consistency of love you continually dedicate to your lover is admiring, and it proves how far you're willing to keep going in order to tend to the intensity of your relationship. You've expressed yourself well, keep it up.

Posted 11 Years Ago


stars are far

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
good write friend..........

Posted 11 Years Ago


Nice poem ... Merry Christmas Stars are far

Posted 11 Years Ago


stars are far

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much.. merry chirstmas to u too..hope u have a happy new year
Overall, I really enjoyed reading the poem. As you are from Lebanon, I must ask if English is a second language for you? Your phrasing as well as a few minor grammatical errors lead me to believe it is. For instance, in the last stanza, own should be owns. Do not let that put you off though, we all make our share of grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing your lovely poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


stars are far

11 Years Ago

yes English is my second language,actully I'm an english literature student at university, but still.. read more
Michael

11 Years Ago

Please do not let grammar get in your way or discourage you. I grew up with it and it still in a ch.. read more
stars are far

11 Years Ago

I still try my best.. and i will always since I love it and I have the will l..thank you for incour.. read more

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Added on December 22, 2013
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Tyre, Lebanon



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