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A Poem by stars are far

It started in a way we never expected it

You and I , planning for a life…

I play that game of friendship and you that of love…

Then we both fell…But I ell so hard ..

 

It was not on my plane , but it came to me

I never wanted you ,but you stick to me

I was so lonely and I fell for it…Fell or you ..to be we !

All what I have o love ,I gave to thee…

 

And now ..here we are … three month passed

And we are still here… I still love you but …

But..you are acting like I don’t exist anymore

I’m just too shy to even say I love you …!!!

 

Is that right or Am I wrong ?

I just ask you to make me feel it ..

Feel that I’m yours and you are mine…

Those words will never come from my lips …

 

But ..Love is blind …I am blind to everything

I can see everything with clear eyes

But I will ignore every bad thing until you realize…

That I did all of that because I truly love you !

© 2013 stars are far


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A sincere poem which i can relate i can feel the emotion you write about. well done

Posted 11 Years Ago


"But ..Love is blind …I am blind to everything

I can see everything with clear eyes

But I will ignore every bad thing until you realize…

That I did all of that because I truly love you !"

A very sweet and gentle poem...Thank you for penning...:)..........


Posted 11 Years Ago


stars are far

11 Years Ago

thank you for your review :)
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)..............
The pleas for a lover to return are apparent here, and I do believe your emotions portray themselves in this piece. Well done, a lovely portrayal of a relationship started perfectly but gone awry.

Posted 11 Years Ago


stars are far

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)

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Added on October 25, 2013
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