What I Like From you ..

What I Like From you ..

 

Everytime you smile to me

I fly I die , I feel the world is just you and me

Evey time you look at my’eyes

I be lost, lost and just wanna find my way…

 

I love the way you smile the way you laugh below my mind

I love it when you sing,sing ,sing and go crazy like ding ding ding

I love the way you talk ,walk and do it in your way

I love it, I love just your everything …

 

Every time you walk though the hall

My face turn red like a socker ball

I cant find the way out of my room

And all what there is one big door

 

I love it ..i love you and everything about your words

I love it when you say that life is just nothing without you

I want you to be …Only for me …I want you too see… Only mee

I want to own you and own your soul …I want you to call the one mine own ….

 

I love it …I love you I love your everything…

I will sing this for you out loud infront of the ocean …

I love it ,,I love you… so let me think back again…

I will wake you everyday to call your name ,..i will wake up

Every day to whisper I love you…so dum dum dum ,,,

I love you and the way you do your everything…

 

I CAN’T STOP LOVING YOU BABY

Author's Note

hehe thats not actully a poem ..i tried to write a song :P
And well first try so .,.. I dunno :D
hehe ..

Reviews

[khalid]

very sweet tune and nice music flows across the lines. i liked how you have penned this. it expresses big deal of happiness you are feeling inside of you and that adds a lot of action and movement to it as a song. i only think you would better said..i get lost, instead of i be lost...and the similarity between your face getting red when yo get shy and the socker ball isnt good. because, the socker ball isnt often red and it isnt that good think to make a similarity between your face as a sweet thing and the ball as something can be shot and thrown away...
very sweet song and very nicely penned.

[Alice]

I think its great especially for a first time song writer!

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thank you hehe :D

[Tai Ryens]

What a beautiful tribute, I'm sure the person who's receives this would appreciate it. I especially love the 'dum dum dum' in the end, as it adds a unique, unexpected feel to the poem. Well done.

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hehe yeah ...thank you so much tai :D

[Dayran]

An exaltation of the qualities that is attributed to someone else ... so total and complete ... it can only be for our creator. To mix that with the suggestion of a man is indeed flattering. Such a man, if he's true will help you to see that about yourself. Nice.

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thank you so much Dayran :D