My Destiny Is You

Its always been like that

I dream about your eyes all night

I wake up at the morning to catch a laugh

And send it to you in my heart…

 

I believe that everyone have a soul mate

And every day I be sure that mine is you…

Destiny whispers in my ear and look at me

To make me fall again with you ….

 

Your words just make me melt and fly

And when you talk to me

I feel  like a song will pop out from my head

And make it all rock like never …

 

When you look at me I see the butterflies

And whenever you touch me I melt and faint

I can’t describe how I feel but its you

Who affect on me crazily …

 

Baby, baby … your are the one

I want my destiny to be you

I want to be poisoned forever in your eyes

And never leave your laps baby…

Author's Note

For you :D

Reviews

[Aehr]

I love this! ITs so cute, and sweet in a very non-cheesy way. I mean, it actually is a good description of what love feels like. There are a few grammatical errors here and there, but all in all, good job :)

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thank you so much ..and yeah i have some problem with dealing with my grammar :/

[Aehr]

Don't worry. It'll get better with time and practice :)

[Alice]

awh this is such nice poem a recommend it to all audiences

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thank you alice :D

[Tai Ryens]

Submitting to the other, wanting them despite the knowledge that they might as well be poison, yet you still love them. Sounds exhausting, but we're all prone to making the mistake. Well done.

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thank you tai :D

[Dayran]

A poem that is certainly not physical reality but occupies the realms of creative enthusiasm for the most perfect ... and the satisfaction of the dreamer's impulses. Well dreamt SAF ... but you could bring to it a greater relevance of impulse and carefree impulsiveness.