Our Lasting Song

It is a new chapter in our book 

I hold the pen and you whisper to me 

The words I never thought about

In our love story and our dream land ...

You sing to me a love song under the rain

With every drop of rain calling your name

Whenever you move with the music to dance

My heart beat more and taste you glance .

The thunder stood there watching us

And the lightning showing there making no fuss 

The street is empty and the tress are there

But its feeling lively ,and not falling in despair .

The rain was making the music and the rhymes

And your voice was melting the rocks in the globe

Making the volcanoes erupt in all the ways

And keeping my heart beating more and more..

Baby, Look at the nymphs in the heaven 

They are looking at us as we are more that angels

Let this song be forever on with no stop 
And let me collab with you till the end ...

Baby ,I love you more that this world

I want you more than I want my soul

baby, lets be together for the non-ever

And forget that tomorrow can be a giver..

I will always love you baby <3

Author's Note

For my baby *?* ...I hope one day to dance with you under the rain <3

Hope you enjoy it :)

Reviews

[Dayran]

A communication by a woodsman in the forest is just as melancholic ... even as he chops down his selection of trees for them to grow again. But your poem convinces me that he does it with tears in his eyes ... for its a duty he cannot move away from. Nicely done.

[Patrick Gerlits]

A scene that takes place in the WORLD as it is powerful and dangerous yet docile and complacent towards the all powerful omnipotent emotion of love.

The rain became the orchestra and the thunder the beat. The lightning giving glimpses to the couple in the midst of everything. As if the world were turning at their whim, the beauty of the emotion absolute in its power, even if the moment last a second the second would last forever and tomorrow would never come. This is it, and this is now.

This is the love of two people without any other care.

[stars are far]

Thanks for reading this :)

[Joan*Eckhart]

Wow, this was amazing. So romantic and very obviously bursting with love.

[Tai Ryens]

Romantic, once more, you've really refined your writing over time. Well done~

[khalid]

very lovely love song. i love how you have penned it. hoping your dreams would come to trth..

[donny ingraham]

well written and well expressed

[The Lost Poetry Files]

Wow, so beautiful and romantic...

Goodluck in your new relationship...All the best...

Keep writing fine poetry, its superb :)

[stars are far]

thank you :)