Live With Real Eyes

Its not how we always see that smile

Behind every glance there is something 

And every breeze will blew at its right time

And not every love story ends with a ring ...

Nothing is so clear and bright 

Even those stars are night

Are rocks and dark from near sight

They are just a lie infront of the eye...

You hear the laughs in this world 

Without knowing what to be happy about

Some laughs are because of nothing 

But he might be drunk or something ...

He say he loves her an go away

Without knowing what he must say 

He lie to her and play love game

But even this is a lie in life ...

Nothing is true as we see 

Sun seems to be nice and shinney 

But come closer to it and you be

Burnt and dead as ashes only left ..

Sea seems to be so deep 

But one day or other you will reach the end

Your eye show everything so great

But come closer and everything will be fake...

Don't believe you eyes always

They lie to you just like people do 

Believe in what you can't see

Because your soul is something more real ..

Reviews

[The Lost Poetry Files]

Wow, very wise writing, you do think deep, you surely aren't hablaa for sure :P

Love this splendid piece

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hehe yup that is deep..
plus you dunno me well if you dont know that is my thoughts :/
thank you for reading :)

[Ravyne Hawke]

Such sadness in this piece.. the rejection of love and not being able to trust what you see. I have a feeling that the love you thought was there was all a lie and now there's all this doubt. Nice expressive poem.

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Yes ..its from my memories.. I faced this..
Thank you so much

[Ravyne Hawke]

glad it is from your past and not your current situation *smiles*

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Thank you...you're so kind :)