you are !

you are !

A Poem by stars are far

You are the one 
You are the one that I want to call my light in the dark
You are the one that I want to consider my own 
You are the one that I will live and smile for
You are the one that I will be his forever and ever .

Can we be one and not two ?
Can we make that promise togther forever we are ?
Can we choose to be the smiles of each other ?
Can we just be those lovers ?!

I had a crush on you because of you smile
I liked you because of your honesty
I loved you because of your white heart
And I ADORE YOU because of your everything ..

I want you to the rest of my life 
I want to be yours and no anyone else 
Look at the stars at night 
And pray for us to always be alright <3 

© 2013 stars are far


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I like the poem , its sentiments and the repetition of : You are ...Bravo

Posted 11 Years Ago


stars are far

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)
a very light and heartfelt poem that has this sense of innocence to it that makes you really fell the love that you express to dearly in this piece and i myself love strong finishing lines that really are punchy and hug the meaning behind the poem which i thing you did great =) However the only one problem i have with this is that emoticon at the end the "

Posted 11 Years Ago


stars are far

11 Years Ago

Thanks alot..and the emotion at end is a mistake ..sorry :)

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Added on July 27, 2013
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