Well Done

A Poem by stars are far

Can you stop saying it for a while

Can you just take a look to the outter world

And live for a few minuits without lying :??

All what I ask for is a moment of truth

And want to fell what you people call peace .

Is it too difficult to act this ,I dont think so..

You act in the play thats caled "life"

You act well... you act a play without a script

But still act it perfectly...You know your role .

Well done .

Don't hold that pen to color my portrait

Don't try to give me a glance ....

It won't work..it won't change anything ..

Don't worry .

STOP>>STOP>>STOP>>stop there

Stop the lies ..stop them ...be real ...

For once ...be truthful ..just once..

Is t too much ???

© 2013 stars are far

Author's Note

17-5-2013..
please tell me what do think and point my mistakes please..
i will be thankful :)

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Your writing skills need a lot of work. I kind of know what you're talking about but your grammar is very bad. I understand you are Lebanese so you'll need a little more time to know English writing.

It can be very frustrating when someone lies to us. They might as well be with someone else instead of wasting our time. I can see you wrote this from the heart.

Can you stop saying it for a while
Can you just take a look to the (outer) world
And live for a few (minutes) without lying?

All (that) I ask for is a moment of truth
I want to feel what people call peace.
(Is it too difficult to act this? I (don't think so.)

You act in the play that('s) (called) "life."
You act well... you act (in)a play without a script
But still act it perfectly...You know your role.
Well done.

Don't hold that pen to color my portrait
Don't try to give me a glance....
It won't work..it won't change anything,
Don't worry.

STOP>>STOP>>STOP>>stop there
Stop the lies ..stop them ...be real ...
For once ...be truthful, just once.
Is (it) too much?