What if ?

What if the sun didn't raise tomorrow

And the hell stopped being fire based ?

What if the snow stopped being white 

And the sea became countable ?

 

Will you stay loving me 
And calling me your babe ?

Will you stay saying I'm beautiful

And see me as "Miss World" ?

 

What if the sand stopped being brown 

And the sky started being pink ?
What if the moon stopped raising at night

And started smiling during the day ?

 

 

Will you still call me you moon between the stars

And telling me I'm the night light ?

Will you stay hugging me during the day 

And love me day and night ?

 

For me I have no doubt of stop loving you

Even if the sun started being ice ball

And the life started turning to other side

I will always love as I'm sure you won't forget me ..

here

Author's Note

For my the star that shines my life and the moon that shows me my way...
For the one i love and forever will :)
I say i love you <3

Reviews

[Mrs.Lovett]

Lovely

[Aehr]

I love the picture you've painted here with your words or us readers :) 'What if' is a powerful phrase indeed. You've done well. Keep writing!

[stars are far]

Thank you

[Poppie Mira]

beautiful imaginary!!!

[stars are far]

Thank you :)

[khalid]

very nice feelings of love and passion. i liked how you wanted to join between the impossible issues and your love. i know you wanted to say that you would never stop loving them whatever happens. all lovers say the same when love is strong anyway. i just have some points...
the sun didnt rise, not raise
still call me your moon, not you moon
for me i have no doubt of stopping loving you, not of stop loving you..although it is not appropriate to say it this way because it means you are sure you are going to stop loving them...it is better to say, i have no doubt that i will never stop loving you...

[Ravyne Hawke]

Nice poem.. sounds like the romance is still in early stages because you need so much reassurance. I have to say, the colors and the font do not do much for me and your grammar needs some work, but I see Christopher tried to help you out with that. You have some nice images in this piece.

[Tai Ryens]

Fear of a ended relationship is what I see here. I quite despise that feeling; wanting it to either just merely blow over so you may get over it quickly or vanish to the doubtless love of a lover.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

I really like this poem,
very heartfelt and loving...
im sure ...ser feel the same :)

Well done :)