I'm Not A Writer

I'm Not A Writer

A Poem by stars are far

I'm not a writer 
I'm not a writer as you know
But my pen only dance for you.
I;m not a poet as you see
But the rhyme for you comes from the sea . (deep place meant by it )
I mayn't gain you by some words
But you were my only choice 
You are a tree and others are levies
You stay and they will one day leave .
You are the sea in earth and the life 
With you people knew whats laugh
With you smiles have painted the skies
And the universe get jealous from earths life .
I'm not a writer as you know
But I try my best to impress you 
And my love to you will always stay
Not only in words but also in my life's way ..

© 2013 stars are far


Author's Note

stars are far
For Someone So Special To Me <3 <3
Vivo per te
Thanks For your reviews :)

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Sid
Nice write, there are some errors but the message it conveys is good. Btw in this line "You are a tree and others are levies" I'm guessing it should "leaves" and not "levies"...anyways good write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautiful!! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well...it was a read request, not a review request. I read it. It was fine. The grammar is slightly off though. Cheers! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


stars are far

12 Years Ago

thank you ... and yeah.. but some people review and i respect both and thanks for reading :)

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